blogpost #9

i think that the autobiographical writing went well because i didn't encounter that many problems that i couldn't fix on my own. i wrote my essay with multiple people talking. i wrote it as if the characters such as my mom dad and cousin were talking to them selves and of course i included what they thought about me. this aspect of the writing allowed me to expand on my paper. it made my paper longer and more fulfilling, i also included a big peice of my life and a moment that definitely caused me to continue to stay on track with my life and education. i think that My essay is good but i had trouble closing it out. i had trouble finding a way to finish out my ideas without leaving anything out for one and making it seem incomplete. i like these type of essays though because it allows me to be creative. being creative is something i love doing. i hate being kind of restricted to a certain form of writing. i like to feel somewhat free. writing this essay was a fun challenge. i tried to stay as detailed as possible. i believe that this is extremely important considering autobiographical works are filled with detail that makes the work good. without details the writing wouldn't be good at all. in these type of writings u are including key moments in your life so that's why i focused on it a lot. hopefully it is good.